I told you that I loved you
And I promised not to lie
But I promised you with all my heart
I'd be there for life
Im sorry that I let you down
Im sorry I made you cry
I just couldn't be with you
So im sorry that I lied
I still love you deeply
And that is the truth
But I'd rather hurt myself quickly
Then slowly come to hate you
Our pain will ease in time
And maybe we'll be friends
Cause I will fulfill part of my promise
And be there for you 'til the end
One more kiss before we go
Just one more I love you
Im sorry if you wanted more
But thats all I can do
Author notes
This was written quite a while ago but it was to an Ex boyfriend who well wasnt what I wanted to say the least I just got bored and a fell for another guy who is now my boyfriend .
I havn't written anything in a bit what did you think????
Comments
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Really well spoken and straight to the point and with a hint to regret
"Im sorry if you wanted more
But thats all I can do"
I just love them last lines so very honest in your feelings great job
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i always love your work and there an no major problems too worry about... it is wonderful as it is but if you think you need to fix anything it will be just as good or better
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Amazing, in my opinion.
I really liked this.
though...the last few lines, i think...seemed a bit out of rhythm...but idk, maybe I'm not reading it right, lol...i might brain-dead today...who knows...
anyways,
i really liked this writes, i think its amazing and briliant!!
Keep writing,
Annie Shadows
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this was amazing duuuude!!!
"Our pain will ease in time
And maybe we'll be friends
Cause I will fulfill part of my promise
And be there for you 'til the end"
i LOVED that part! so sweet and heartfelt!
awesome write xxxx
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