I've a poem in my heart.
Hear it if you can.
It always hears you!
I've a poem in my heart.
Bless it if you will.
It continually blesses you!
Yes, it hears
and blesses;
knows and sees.
I've a poem in my heart.
It is titled
'Life'.
© amber langham
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hmm...i suppose i had a poem in my heart tonight, & it went a little something like this!
What did you think
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this sis sweet and heartfelt...I loved it...uncluttered with fancy words or bitterness...it flowed simply and sweetly like a mountain brook!!! great job here!!! more, more, more!!! peace and light, Kendal
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Thats a wonderful life poem. Very short and sweet. It was a pleasure to read thank you for sharing your poem with me.
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Lovely, direct and heart-felt. A pleasure to read. Buff
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Nice write here. I like the thought you developed (ironically, I recently penned a poem that I titled "Life." )
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Thank you for reading my haiku 'Mime'...Your poem "Life" is quite wonderful also...
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Right On
You did a wonderful job.
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Life can truly be poetry in motion. This is tender and gentle and sincere. Very enjoyable. ~Pamela
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Wow
this little gem speaks for all of us, a superb poem from
everybodys heart "life" if only we all had the same sentiment in our hearts -
Too often, as people in this world, we let the bs that has been placed upon us by years and years of corruption and oppression blind us to the fact that we are not helpless but enabled and free. Not by any document or parchment; we are free because the spirit of man must ultimately be free or die off. There is a great sentiment in this poem that is powerful to the person that holds onto it. kudos
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amen to that
you have expressed my sentiment/world view precisely in a sentence. it's odd that sometimes we don't know where we're writing from, but only what we're writing about. thanks for the generous comment! -
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Odd?
"it's odd that sometimes we don't know where we're writing from, but only what we're writing about."
I don't think it's odd at all. I think its beautifully mysterious.
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This had a real Charles Bukowski feel to it..
blue bird...
..there's a blue bird in my heart that wants to get out..
Same tone ....
just excellent...
this has true stated beauty.....
...I've a poem in my heart......
...it is titled
...'life'.
a poem called life...sometimes in flowing rhyme...
and others in jagged edge free verse...
Stunning work lass,
Lowell Poe.
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captivating
the cadence and repition, like a psalm, I canhear it being sungn
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Ah, this is lovely! The rhythm is interesting and effective. I don't think I've ever read one quite like it. Well done!
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You know there's something funny about that poem's title... it's so familiar, I can't quite....
You know there's something funny about life, I don't know if you know this... it's delicious. -
This write is really good Nice and simple but the words mean a lot. Well done!
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o wow, flows like lyrics, reads like a beautiful piece of poetry with some great personification put into it, i love how you have written this and think it is a great piece of writing, well done and keep up the good work.
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