Your face
traced
by my lips, fingers
now etched
a savored soulprint.
Shutterfly snapshots
saved.
Momentos of memories in minds eye
reprimand remembrance.
Film reel plays
without edit
Awaiting...
To be continued......
Author notes
To my Man of "Tomorrow". I trace All of me to All of you!
In a list
A contest entry
- A contest just because I want to comment people. by AutumnsFlame.
400 points, ended May 29, 51 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Does anyone understand this or feel this, please tell me
Comments
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maybe you should hook up with twins
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creative and filled with emotion. Lovely work...you are a superstar girl! Wonderful work from you, glad I could stop by and say Hello!
~Tia
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Whooch!!!!! Oh, my God, where have you been? I just read your messages this morning...darling, you have been so missed.
Reading your poetry feels like home...it really does. xxxooo Laney
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Oh yummy! Whew this is good! I am so glad
you are back and writing again! Your talent
really shines in this one! Good luck in the contest.
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Your work is always amazing to me, as is our friendship. Both of us have had our muse kidnapped..Glad to see you were able to write something so outstanding.
I have loved your style and have missed it..
Good luck..
Love you
Nor
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Oh Whoochi this is suberb in many different ways. Sensual with class.
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Oh my! I sure have missed your poetry! I love this; you coined a word and it makes perfect sense. "Shutterfly". How cool!
Love,
Amera♥
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Great as usual!!! You are a magnificent writer and I love the formate.... Best wishes in the contest!!!!!!
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this is so beautifully sensual, hon. Excellent.
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I love the image of a soul print. This goes beyond a simple statement of love, to reverence and life changing event. Wonderful phrase.
The piece captures the tension of the moment when someone who is a soul mate, a piece of your life, is discovered and how the effect they have on you is never lost, no matter the separation, no matter what the circumstance. Beautifully done. Good to hear from you again.
Your friend,
Tom B.
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i like this, it creates such images and i like how you used short lines, it made it very effective, keep writing, you're amazing =]
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BULLSEYE
Squirt, You once again have captured every essence of a moment and described it magnificently!!! The title says it all but the last line "To be continued", makes me smile and tingle. OOOHHHHRRRRRRRR I so treasure your writings!!!
Love you,
M.O.T
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such a powerful poem thats in fact ripe with emotion and love, film reel plays without edit are my fave lines, i dont know why just something about them and i love the style that the pome i s written in and love the flow of it, well done on a truly great write.
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choice.
to your man of tomorrow?
that's sweet -
you have not losy your touch in painting your images.
Buddy
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"...Film reel plays without edit..." That line hits me. I wish I knew a good editor
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absolutely lovely
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you know damn well this was to me
great to see you back sexy
good luck in the contest..this was simply breathtaking.
Love ya
Passions
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Whoochi....after a long spell of not butting heads on here..glad to see you again...like your candid write above with imagery...you are a gifted writer...Love you philosphy of God icidences...My firm belief too....Keep penning luv...
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