I broke down and cried today
Like everyday.
With thoughts of you
Running through my head.
How can I forget about you?
Trying every method I can
failing at the tempt to forget
For you reside in my mind
like a plague that can't be cured.
Author notes
written 3/27/09 finished 3/28/09
A contest entry
- A contest just because I want to comment people. by AutumnsFlame.
400 points, ended May 29, 51 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hmm..I thought of a spesific person while I read this. Well written. I love it. Xds-gX
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dont try to f orget just let your mind do its thing you will soon enough forget great piece keep it up....
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Sad, emotional, heart-felt. Good write!
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wow such a deep tale of sadness. i love the way you expressed how you wish they could leave your mind, but it's impossible with thoughts of them running freely. i love the little hidden twist, it makes one think.
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oh I absolutely love the words and the way in which you used them..wonderful
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