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sunlight.

whenever i see
your smile,

that incandescent
shine amidst the
space between us,

i can see the sunlight
reflecting off the
worn down bricks
and cracked sidewalks,

never fading to
the attraction
beckoning in the
white lights
of our eyes.

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burning through the clouds

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  • jinsays gold member
    April 6, 2009

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    This is lovely. The affection you display is sweet, touching.
    I thank you for taking the time to enter this contest, and I wish you all the best.
    Love,
    jin