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Whispers





Whispers
of rain fall now
upon the sadness of
a weary heart beating within
each drop.

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  • Mari Goes gold member
    April 1

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    You! Always expressing your feelings so well and with so much emotion...
    Bella Mi!


    • acqua
      April 1
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      Ah, Mari, Thank You! I am having trouble writing, but trying.
      BellaYou!
      (((((((Hugs))))))
      mi


  • Yemassee gold member
    March 29

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    Just little patters of sadness, but each contains a reason for their being, a life of their own and contain the kernel of pain.

    The whispers, what it says, it's that prayer to be delivered from the weariness. Again, it is beautiful Mi.