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Tip Toe

The scars between the gates
Remind you of a tale
Tip toe, tip toe,
Don't breathe a word

Just a peek is all I want
To get a glimpse of that sweet aroma
Tip toe, tip toe,
Shhh

Ah! There it is!
Lips so moist
Tip toe, tip toe
Don't be afraid

Dammit! Don't scream everyone will hear
Hurry hurry open the creamy gates for me
Tip toe tip toe
what is happening?

Duct taped by the hit
That mama or daddy will know
Uncle Jason touched me
The scars between my legs will always show

Author notes

It can be better...I know it can...but how?

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  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    March 31

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    This one is so sad...sorry you had to endure that then and I am sure even now...thank you for sharing with us, your words...

  • a very sad tale.

    penned with emotion, good luck

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    • Reiga
      March 28
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      Thanks for the comment! I am glad you enjoyed it~