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Letter of love

My dearest love,


How can I express to you, the feelings that haunt my soul?
How can I even begin to tell you what I`ve been hiding from the world for so long, hiding from myself for even longer.
It is almost suffocating my soul I cannot function anymore, clouds my mind with fear and misery.
The thought of never being in your embrace feeling your hand against my face, is excruciating agony
The thought of being alone in a dark room with no one to hold me and keep me safe, terrifies me.
The thought of no one to reassure me when I lose control of myself, makes me want to die.
God it aches when I see you make the same mistake repeatedly.
I want to scream ‘notice me for who I am’
Why can’t you love me for me?
Can’t you see how much I love you?
Can’t you see I will always love you

Yours forever

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  • jcwiz
    May 17

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    I like the way the verses shorten at the end, has the effect of concentrating emotions and delivering them in a more forceful way: love beyond redemption.


  • UnbelieveableNate
    May 17

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    A bit of a wake up call for me

    I hate you...Then again...I'm loving you for making me realize a few things. I think you just snapped me out of depression, then again you also snapped me out of a dream that was wonderful...but it was soon to end. I'm thankful I was awoken by your words rather than the stinging sensation of realities alarm clock... So thanks.


    • The Lone poet
      May 23
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      The 'joys' of being a tortured soul, i guess. I appreciate your comment, although at first I was confused by it.


  • Heavens Child
    April 18
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    Deep emotions expressed very well. I like how you write in the style of posing questions. Very nicely written!


  • KatherineAnne
    April 12

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    Impresive.

    Wow. I love the emotion in this write. The longing to be accepted and loved by the one you love unconditionally.

    "How can I express to you, the feelings that haunt my soul?
    The thought of never being in your embrace feeling your hand against my face, is excruciating agony"

    Great job =)

  • Angelshadow
    March 29
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    pretty good

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