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Darkness in Beauty.

The darkness so apparent in beauty.
Whimsical shadows cast from a crow.
A cliff on the edge of pure zen.
Bright flowers bloom on dead bark.
The darkest sky in the purest of memories.

Belleza en la oscuridad.

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    March 30

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    This is a great poem - I really like the way that you capture an instant in such a lovely poem, dark but beautiful - like the title says I think from a constructive criticism point you might like to look at not having this as a string of sentences, it makes the flow a little choppy - but that is just my opinion and I enjoyed this poem!

    Welcome to the site, I hope that you enjoy your time here at AllPoetry!


    Polly
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  • liftmeupletmefall
    March 28
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    Beautiful

    Great that you can convey so much with so few words, well done