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Organized

I assume a higher function
serves as adhesion to our hearts
seemingly separated by the dark.

We whom are so ardent to invent saviors
naturally ban together so as to organize such a thing;
only our aspirations collide with our lesser natures
and we claim more than the truth, tribal bona fides.
 
Cardinal virtues like love have their own unwritten catechism;
unaffected by any man-made schisms.
 
 
 
 
 
 

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  • islekine gold member
    March 29

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    Oh yes....

    Excellent!
    Bumper sticker we have here: It's not God I have a problem with, it's his organized fan clubs!
    write on!
    Thanks for sharing!


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    March 28

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    interesting to gnaw and chew upon this poem!
    way to inspire and salivate our cores!
    ears/Seattle


  • maralisa silver member
    March 28

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    a brillant write I like this your words resinate religion on many levels throughout good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • jcat gold member
    March 28
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    Organized religion is just a euphemism for organized crime....


  • Ithica silver member
    March 28

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    Shit schticks and doctrines have a way with slanting the truth... do they not? I have a hard time totally trusting anything that I haven't heard from the horse's mouth... and even that may be suspect too!!!

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