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What if?

If i told you i cry,

Enough to keep the goldfish alive,

Would you believe me?

Would you wonder why?

Or would you laugh and say i'm stupid?

 

If i washed off my smile,

Showing you my deep depression

Would you say i'm too young?

Would you talk to me?

And would you share your pills with me?

 

If i took off my top

And showed you all my scars

What would you do?

Would you run a mile,

And be afraid of what i'm capable of?

 

If i showed you my notebook

Full of hatred and suicide notes,

Would you call me selfish?

Would you blame the music?

Would you punish me by taking it away?

 

If i said i wanted help,

Proper professional help,

Would you want to know why?

Would you let me?

Would you support me and not judge me?

 

If you saw me cold on the floor

Wrists bloody and overdose taken

Would you know I was secretly screaming?

Would it hit you hard to know that i've wanted this?

Would you finally realise, i've never been honest to you,

Since the moment we tried to run away from it all?

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  • XxXSilentlyDyingXxX
    April 6

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    This has so much
    pain and emotion
    I feel myself in
    your
    words soo much
    This is really good
    This is such a great write
    Sincerly~Emogirlinpain


  • XxemohatexX
    April 4

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    wow this is ... i always knwo wah tto say but this relay hit me its how i feel each and ecvery day i sat and told my guy all the problems to see if he would do tha tturn adn run away but he didnt but still i wonder how long will you stqay long enough to take all i have lefty away?


    greta wright and i agree you can ttell parents this i told mom and i was grounded for a week adn then i tryed a conceler and she didnt liek the idea then she decided to put me on medication that i lose all sence of beign i hat e it

  • vivaladancer61a
    April 3

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    i have asked for help so many times, but my parents just punished me and then, i ended up just trying to find help myself. stay strong, really good poem!

  • Slapper
    April 3

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    Excellent!! Great flow , truly emosional and touches the heart ..!!! I would like to see more of your work !!


  • xXBloodyravenXx
    April 1

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    This is sadly familer to me. I know how you feel and wanted to cry when reading this. I loved lines 16-20. You did a great job on this.


  • usedandbroken
    March 29

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    this is amazing it really speaks out to me, it makes me feel like crying for you but also for bein happy for you for being so strong and writing about it not doing it if that makes any sense x


  • Museobsession
    March 29
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    Great write...!!!

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