I'm such a mess, I wonder how I look through your eyes.
I'm such a mess, I wonder if you see through my lies.
I'm such a mess, I wonder why you don't just say goodbye.
I'm such a mess, I need you to survive.
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Short. Interesting. Leaves the reader thinking... Thanks for entering my contest and best of luck.
♥AllYoullNeverHave -
i really like this one //_^
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ble..........
simple.
kinda cliche
but relateable enough either way -
once again. it's sweet. Very sweet
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Aww so sad! Great write <3 x
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i love your poem hun
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Boyfriends this must be one of those.....or a preant with no understanding.....your work is totally emotional......sad but a heartfelt read...novy
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this one is short but good it shows uncerity towards you life i have been there and i still there to some point you did a wonderful job keep it up
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