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Why was I put on Earth?
to be made fun of?

Oh, GOD
I bet you're laughing at me
or smiling under your skin
at my mistakes.

It's no secret
that in acts of violence
you partake.

My misery -
you enjoy

My misery -
I loathe

I've won,
however,
because I don't need you
to be happy.

I dote upon
the people you've blessed,
and the people that make you smile
upon their success.

I'm not alone.
And for that reason
you've made a mistake.

And Lord,?,
I'm laughing.!.

Author notes

Just blame it on GOD.
because if HE were all that good
he would make life easy
and happy!

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  • pranj
    March 28

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    The poem was good! Really nice!
    But I feel that god didnt make your life, he just made the rules, all you get in your life is a result of either circumstance or mostly actions!