Precious pixie princess
divine holder of the light
a smile of adorableness
to make a dark world bright.
Author notes
a four line poem
A contest entry
- Four-Line Pixie Poems, for members of The Enchanted Realm by PinkPony.
700 points, ended April 2, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
is there anyway to improve on this
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very nice, you have given this strength and great visions come to mind
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Beautiful
Conveys so much light and cheer within four lines, well written my friend. -
This was very sweet; I love poems about pixies!
enchantingly beautiful
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I very much like the idea of pixies. They embody lightheartedness in a way that no other mythical creature does. Fairies remind me of deep thought and wisdom, nymphs are lighthearted... but they're nymphs. Yup, pixies embody the innocence of light. Good Job.
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Wow, love this short and sweet piece. Bravo! Flows and paints a picture at the same time.
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Wonderfully said... so pretty and precious and really pixie perfect!
Ohhhhh! You are so darling, good poet. 
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This poem is so short, yet it holds so much imagery and meaning, which I really admire. I love the alliteration in the beginning and the rhymes too. Great write
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This held more meaning then I thought it would when reading the title.
I assumed it to be a wee unrelatable from a male perspective....
but i was most surprised at the positive whimsical message it held, written with finesse and beauty.
Also me sister was obsessed with pixies.....posters pictures...even today...pixie tattoos...lol.
But this was a sweet group of words that when put together by a true writer,
makes the world a little brighter.
Good job lass,
Liam
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THE ESSENCE OF A BEAUTIFUL PIXIE
This is beautiful! The best of what a pixie is and gives to us all.
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