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Te Amo Mi Amor...I miss you

Even as i dream
your fingers trace my skin
leaving burns that linger
igniting fire from within

i wait for you so patient
i know you will come home
and though your job is necessary
it still leaves me all alone

but on that fateful night
you made my dreams come true
i could hardly breathe
when you asked me to marry you

and though i know your mine
i still gt get nervous now and then
but i still know you'll come home to me
the only question being when

as my dream it finishes
i sigh a one of content
for this i know for sure
Mi Amor you must be heaven sent

your more than i deserve
but you still want me for your own
you want me with a family
and for "us" to have our home.

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  • SandraMVeinot
    March 28
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    thank you for the read and for trying.

  • angryelf6886
    March 28
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    lol....oops totalyt missed the acrostic part...thats what i get for trying to write poety at four inthe morning >.< my bad