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Dancing in the amber flecked grass

Tangled,
between our thoughts,
the wind rushed us hurriedly along,
swaying to the music, made by our tune,
hands gently brushing against the amber grass,
my hair danced cheerfully ,as you smiled,
moving slowly,carefully cherishing,
every moment together,
A Fantasy.

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  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    April 6

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    you have a few spacing errors in here but the write is beautiful. thank you for sharing this with me today and i wish you well in this contest that we both have entered. viyanna rosemarie


  • Reanna Eryn
    April 6
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    Absolutely amazing, breathtaking, lovely