In each teardrop
an unyielding sea of pain
rolls down numbing cheeks
as haunting memories
of what had been smother
every iota of peace in each
of the million little pieces
my aching heart was broken into.
In each sigh
a hopeless wish to let you know
how stupid I feel
that I had you but let you go
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Excellent beautiful sad poem
This is good writing. I especially like the last verse. The rhyme in this last verse is very good.
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I have enjoyed reading your submittal.
There is a wide variety of styles and expressed emotion.
I have read every verse, and will comment further individually
at the end of the contest on the trophy winners.
Thank you so much for taking the time to enter my contest.
Good luck with your thoughts and words.
Rick
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nice
sort of different and shows that there was something there once, you had some pretty good imgry as well. I & V
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