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He Was Everything

He made me laugh
He made me smile
He turned my days of gray
to blue; My sun when it rained.

He was my light in the dark
casting a never ending light
over my heart and through the night.

He was everything
when I had nothing.

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3/27/09

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  • Flowergirl
    March 30
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    very nice work i love it keep up the great writing.....


  • Reiga
    March 28

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    This poem is sad because of the fact that its past tense. It makes you realize that now that he is gone, you feel as though you have nothing. Although it feels as though there is more to tell, I wonder what it is?

    Good job

  • very beautiful write.