I try to fight back the tears
The harder I try the faster they come.
I no longer want to live this life,
Having to hide what I feel.
Why won't it just end?
I can't go on without you
I thought I could,
but is me crying every night
proof enough
That I can't live another day
knowing that your gone?
How long must this go on?
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3/27/09
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I like it.
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I feel this way most of the time..beautifully done sweetie
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so filled with emotion, I can feel ur pain. written very well. great job.
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true pain that i can feel in your words.
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Good job
I really like it
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