Remembering you,
Cold, pale, lifeless,
I greived forever,
I'm done!
No crying,
No lying,
I'm making my self like you!
Digging,
Trying to find you,
Hitting your little black coffin,
Seeing your remains-
Decomposing,
Moggott infested,
I pull your tiny body into mine,
Crying,
As at last we are together.
From now on,
I will be beside you,
Burried 6 feet under,
Being eaten alive!
Author notes
I used the song Like you by evanscence (if you didn't notice) it is a little gross but hope you enjoy
A contest entry
- DARKWRITE challenge (Season 6) Round 1 by Ktulu Blackwolfe.
450 points, ended April 16, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
was too gross??
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A fun darkie
that made me giggle in nightmarish delight. I've always wanted to be eaten alive.
And to do that with someone you love, so romantic!
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Seeing your remains-
Decomposing,
Moggott infested,
Loved the imagery here. Great job!
**Ktulu Blackwolfe** -
deliciously dark and poignant at the same time. Good job!
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great write
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Holy Crap i loved this poem so much gore i love this
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if you liked it you might like cold hearted murder it had more gore in it
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