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my body shakes
mind is seaching for an escape
he sys goodbye
as my eyes cry
the love i once felt
nothing more then a memory now
he is gone in time back to a place
this game he ended
it was true now
im blue
for who knows
if i am ever to truley
recver

what does this sound like i am describing

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