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*Letting Go Was Always the Worst*

Its finally over
Your gone forever
I know I still love you
You can see it too
I think about you everyday
Tell myself I'm okay
No one knows my sorrow
They think I live everyday like there is no tomorrow
Sometimes, the things we feel so deeply
Are the hardest things to say
But I shouldn't keep it in much longer
So I'll just tell you anyway
There's one empty place in my heart
That only one certain person call fill
So, the true fact is
*I love you, and I always will.*

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  • Endeavor gold member
    April 3
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    I have enjoyed reading your submittal.
    There is a wide variety of styles and expressed emotion.
    I have read every verse, and will comment further individually
    at the end of the contest on the trophy winners.

    Thank you so much for taking the time to enter my contest.
    Good luck with your thoughts and words.

    Rick

  • inice

    nice thoughts of a lost love showing the yearning and tenderness. I & V