decays decedent drills,
press against putrid flesh,
leaving lacerations of longing
from lost lovers, dying to live
& living to die.
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A contest entry
- Bring your best PW (5 to 50 words) QUICKY by Meroza.
700 points, ended April 1, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i love this nd thx 4 da note on my poem yea sometimes i just want to die lyk rite now cause m only brother i cna c is nt tlkn ta me it sux
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This really is a twist of the dark. A bit too detailed I fear, it makes the poem a little grotesk. But the ending is a good finish.
Well done.
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the poem goes perfectly with the title...great job with this...giving me the creeps is usually hard...you did it in five lines...great job!
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Excellently writ. The tragic love story angle certianly drew me in
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a nice write good luck in the contest
maralisa
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Ohh.. loving the alliteration. Excellent take!!
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excellent poem.. touchy subject, but excellent poem
good luck
kat
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Me likey
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