Within the mist
of early dawn's light
upon whimsical flight
forgotten now forest
of dismal gloom his woe
pierced of Cupid's bow
raven beauty in heaven's perfection
man's weakness, sweet confection
unfolding in fluttering touches
sweet nectar of passions now free
desires heart doth plea
linger still
my butterfly please
Author notes
Artist Credit ZiiZii_Rock@deviantart
Usual AP rules apply
No sticky caps
No chat speak
No Smut
A contest entry
- Pic Prompt by Carolina Moon.
500 points, ended March 29, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful, sensual write. Wonderful take the picture prompt. Congrats on the gold trophy. Well deserved.
Haley Mary
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Again I thank you for reading and commenting,......
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Dear Rclane: Very sensual write, and filled with such passion. Loved it! Love, Janjan xoxo
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Thank you so much for your time in reading and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed.
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Dear Rclane: You are so very welcome! Love, Janjan xoxo
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Such a beautiful piece..being in love must feel grand..it's been so long I don't remember, but your words make it seem just dreamy. Great work!
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How wonderfully beautiful. Nicely done...Best of luck in the contest.
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oh my this is wonderful
Best wishes to you in the contest
Passions
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