I love the way you always say,
never blame it on the rain.
I adore the way you look at me,
when you call my name.
There's something about you,
that isn't quite the same.
As every other girl I've loved,
you don't play a sordid game. ,
Verse 1.
You care much more for the world,
than you ever care for yourself.
When everyone else is selfish and cold,
you share your wisdom and wealth.
If I were you I'd praise the Lord,
for creating such a beautiful girl.
I know that you're not perfect but,
you're the best in my world.
Chorus
Verse 2.
Even though someone done you wrong,
you still would give your life.
To keep them safe and free all along,
you do what you think right.
There isn't a girl as sweet as you,
I can't see why others blame.
All you do is what you think is true,
you should hold no shame.
Chorusx2
I know that you have struggled,
but keep going, in sweet.
With all this bulky luggage,
it's a wonder you don't retreat.
But as long as you never give up,
I know you'll always be.
The strongest girl I've ever loved,
a star, a rock, a love to me.
Author notes
This was hard.
I wrote this from a guys perspective at me.
I HATE being nice about myself.
Hope this was okay.
In a list
A contest entry
- Write a Love Song... to Yourself! by Loveberry.
1500 points, ended April 27, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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wow! fav lines:
The strongest girl I've ever loved,
a star, a rock, a love to me.
and
All you do is what you think is true,
you should hold no shame.
a very powerful piece, and very cute
i'm not sure why you don't like writing the positive things about yourself, but this ended up fantastically! i am honored to have you as the first entry in this contest
great job! and good luck :]
PS you seem like a great person
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