I told you I hate you,
But you told me I loved it,
I know that your lying,
Making me lie to,
To others and to myself,
Pretending I’m happy
When I know that I’m lonely,
But know that you don’t care,
You never cared and now I’m scared.
69 69 69 seperate diddles 22 22 22
I hate you,
You made me hate me,
You told I was good enough
Then dropped me,
I hate the way you look at me,
Everything about you,
The way you dress,
The way you smile,
Even the way you breathe,
I hope your heart stops,
Drip drop,
Never heard again,
So goodbye,
Alone on this empty throne,
Never to be clone.
Author notes
This isnt a poem it just popped in my head haha
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Well whatever this is then, i like it. Haha and i like the title too! i was like oooh a diddle! haha idk what that is though.. but i liked it. lol
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Hahaha thanks lol a diddle is just like um... a fat cat on a raod so flat with beer in rows and rows haha idk lol or a drunken king named Angledart could blow out a candle with a fart
thats a diddle lol
I need you to read SOTB!!!!! the second book, cuase I need crituqing adn I need you to be dead serious lol and tell me what parts are good, and what parts arent lol you up to it?? cuase I can bring the laptop to church or I can email you chapters though... the first one might be easier idk... taht or I could print out like.... 5 chapters at a time and give them to you each saturday, your choice. but I really need help lol -
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Oh haha ok now i kinda understand diddle. Lol.
Okay i will definitely read it! Idk where i am in it though... i can try! but you know i'm crappy at critiqueing like anything... i'll try though. lol. um you can do whatever works for you, i really don't care. Church works cuz then i won't be bored. Haha.
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