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Before She Found Love She Loved Herself

She saw such beauty in the mirror everyday,
primped and pampered herself in every way.
Until she found love unaware of the lies,
now this little angel is locked away with tears in her eyes.

Before she found love she loved herself,
now she doubts this beauty from the lies he did tell .
Cruel are the young men only learning today,
uses love as just a metaphor to get their way.

 

Told cruel lies for he cares not of her shame,

she feels neglected and withers in pain.

Untaught angels being taken through lies,

is happening every day and every night.

 

Don't be a notch on a school boys belt,

he is only out to satisfy himself.

Once taken he always moves on,

leaving another angel lost and alone.

 

Sometimes the girls are just as bad,

getting what they want but the attention never lasts.

For heavens sakes kids your all still in school,

never take part in sex and stay happy it is the golden rule.

 

Be friends and let it go at that,

having someone to talk to and keep on track.

For to give in will only bring pain,

leaving the angel alone and afraid.

 

For if he truly loved you and respected you today,

that young man wont have a problem if asked to wait.

For love is from the heart and sex is a game,

so tell him no honey and love yourself always.



 

Author notes

Stay safe and enjoy life to its fullest for it is in your childhood years that wen you become older will be the best memnories unless you let yourself down . by s t o r i e s u n t o l d

I so love being a grandma will you let me be yours

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  • Ami
    April 13

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    Yes =)

    Look at my page and message me if you are really interested
    Great Write and
    Thank You for entering
    Good Luck in my contest
    -♥Amanda♥

  • Wonderful.

    Thnks for entering.

    Favorite lines:

    "Don't be a notch on a school boys belt,

    he is only out to satisfy himself.

    Once taken he always moves on,

    leaving another angel lost and alone. "



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  • Carolina Moon gold member
    March 28
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    Wise words of advice you have penned. Well said! Thank you for your entry!

  • Very good write!
    Its true and I like it, really well done. Good luck in the contest I think you took the prompt well! Keep writing.


  • maralisa silver member
    March 28
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    bravo a wonderful write my friend good luck in the contest maralisa


  • wwfhrocks14
    March 27

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    wow, hello my life and it's mistakes. awesome write. fix the typo in the last line. this piece is close to my heart and inspirational. great one!

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