I tango in the blazing flames of your eyes
Consuming me with the fires of your craving heart,
Nipping my existence' elixir from your sultry lips.
We sway, flesh on flesh, on our cradle of delight,
covered in our succulence, reveling in our bliss,
all sheltered and cuddled by the rumbling passion,
intoxicated, rolling and the sweltering vapor of sizzling ardor
Soaring and towering to supreme heights of
devotion.
Trustee of my heart as long as I can remember,
I purify our love with my heavy teardrops of worship and fear.
Wipe out my ache by your charisma and love,
soothe my anxieties by pledging your lasting company
free my sighs of gratification along with your adoration and sensuality.
Be mine and to no other belong and I am yours for the eternity.
Author notes
Isn't what every lover is looking for? love and security from the partner, stability and devotion? assurance he is mine and I am his.
A contest entry
- Straight from the Heart by Ken-Maverick.
650 points, ended April 9, 26 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Wow, this was stupendous and so full of loving words of devotional imagery. I really like the entire rhythm of this and how it drips with wanting and sincerity. Very well done.
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thank you my dear Scarlett
your words make me so happy dear, oooh and the other words you told me i keep in there, treasured and i am trying to follow them
thank you for everything
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Wow, marvelous job with this write!
Great flow and imagery here as well as great emotion portrayed throughout!
Bravo
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Beautiful and an excellent write, very romantic, an expression of undying love. Blessings.
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thank you so much for your kindness :)
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TERRIFIC
It was a pleasure to read! Thnx for entering -
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Thank you for responding and commenting
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JUDGED!!
Yes indeed that's what every lover looks for in life.
A beautifully penned poem here poet!
All the best to you in the contest
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Ken thank you so much dear
I just refreshed the page and couldnt believe myself. thank you so much. well that is from my heart that i thought wouldnt be hurt anymore as it is supposed to be mature, only to discover that the older you get the worse your heart could suffer from injury and would take a long time to heal.
never expected this coming really, the hurt
and the trophy my dear.you made my day
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You are welcome poetess,
It was well deserved and something I can relate to aswell.
Thanks for entering
Ken
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thank you my dear for reading and commenting
unfortunately, it seems that it was not that what he was looking for!
so hurtful to find out that.
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My favorite dance is the tango! When I was young I was a ballroom dancer. I am single now and I remember all of these feelings. They ring true to me and make me weep. What a beautiful poem! Good luck in the contest!
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thank you my dear for your wonderful words and care
well we do remember things and memories that touch us and hitting sensitive nerve unleashes our emotions into rivers
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Not bad at all... heartfelt.
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Thank you my dear for reading it :) and commenting
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Nice first line! Dancing, especially dances like the tango, is a sensual experience, and you've captured it well. I also really like the swaying "on our cradle of delight" image, as well as being "sheltered and cuddled by the rumbling passion."
Should there be a "to" added before "no other belong" in the last line?
Overall, good job!
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thank you so much for reading and commenting :)
actually the inspiration was given by a contest and it took me time writing it today that I guess they judged the other contest but it is ok. thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement. -
This is very good. I enjoyed reading it. It flowed very well and the imagery you used was very good. thanks for sharing this with us. Good job
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