The winds have all went quiet.
The sun melts beneath the sands.
The world is cold and I'm lost in no mans land.
I walk alone along the path, searching for what I've lost.
His eyes as red as fire, his gaze burns through my lies.
He sees what all I try to hide.
He brings out the worst in me.
He watches me as I fall.
My morals have all been shaken, I'm blazed and drowning in a daze.
Take me away from this endless regret.
Take me into the shadows.
Erase me from your memories.
Forget me.
Please tell me what you think
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Totally agree with madison, I love this.. like. idk its you and i've missed your writing my love! im glad to see you writing again.. Love you tons and bunches.
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Not sure who "he" is but in my probably incorrect interpretation I see him as the devil. If I had put myself in the writer's shoes, i would have to say that I love him. To love the devil would be an awful and awesome thing. The icing on the cake for an extreme metaphor. I'm not getting anywhere with what I'm saying.
Conclusion: I really like this. I'm going to print it out and put it on my bullitin of special scraps of paper.
See you in choir,
Madison
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