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~Just Me~

 

 

 

It does seem we have a few things in

common, you and I, wanting to belong

to have a family tree, give us shelter

and encouragement.

 

 

Jake friends and family

or even a lover can help you breathe

and bring out the best in each other.

 

 

 

What i have is simple……. nothing

fancy or candy coated with the sweetest

intentions, just something special.

 

 

I feel friendships like anything else need

to build and gain that momentum and in

time you will decide where you want me

to be.

 

 

 

i can be your confidante, and even say

a prayer, you see we serve the same God

but that doesn’t stop me from writing about

sensual or pleasure..

 

 

 

I don’t judge or act self righteous, I know

i am the least who is sin free, along with

every thing… I am still just me. ~Rend~

 

 

I can be your sister who would give advise

,you can give some to me and be a friend

who is never fair-weathered ,make you laugh

because laughter is the best medicine.

 

 

 

Or that some one special who would write

poetry filled with love and infatuation or just

simply your muse, we could collaborate on a

few and that would be so much fun together.

 

 

 

Jake i hope you find what you looking for

and may all your slots be filled with family

and friendships,just know i am here if you

ever need someone. 

 

Blessings Always

 

Rend

Author notes

I can be what you need, I think i coverd most of the bases


Please comment and I would gladly return the favor, written in my style, if there are any revision please be kind enough to I M so i can make changes privately,

Rend

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  • Junkyard
    July 24
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    wonderful write..

  • Beautiful

    A lovely, honest self portrait.


  • Wickedruby1 gold member
    June 16

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    Excellent

    This piece needs no editing, it is perfect as written,
    it should fill all the requirments anyone could set for you. I would want some one to feel this way about me.Five Stares


  • angelwalken
    June 16

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    so straight forward

    you put everything on the table ........not too many people have the courage to do this, you offer the foundations of life: laughter, friendship, and GOD then you let him know that you will always be there....beautiful!!! I think i need a tissue.....love it


  • penman gold member
    May 1

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    Excellent

    such a well worded write. So filled with touching thoughts. Congratulations on the honorable mention

  • Nice style there.


  • Cannonsfire
    April 5

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    You are probably more than anyone deserves my dear friend. Hopefully he will see that Beautifully written C

    • thank you Chez, you are a true

      blessings and a faithful friend, i so apreciate you and your comments

      Blessings and love

      Rend


  • thepoetssoul
    April 4

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    Your loving heart is blessed and blesses us

    Tony

    • thank you Tony, your comments

      are so encouraging my friend

      Blessings

      Rend

  • awwwwwwwww

    A sweet write from someone who comes across as genuine and real. Glad I took the time to read this. Good job and congrats on the HM. God bless you and keep you, Mark

  • silverfish
    March 31
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    your poem is a sweet blossom on the family tree. -f


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      March 31
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      Hello My sweet friend,

      I am so happy you stopped and gave me a bouquet of flowers,
      the scent is beautiful.

      Thank you so much SilverFishy for your comments.

      Blessings

      Rend


  • Daizee silver member
    March 29

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    I can feel your heart..this is lovely

    Love,
    Stacy

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      March 29
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      Thank you what a gift to have you

      come by and comment! many blessings

      Rend


  • Sandygram silver member
    March 28

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    Oh this was lovely. You would be a wonderful addition to anyones family. I am glad you are a part of mine. Hugs and Smiles, Auntie Sandy


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      March 29
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      Thank you Auntie Sandy,

      I so treasure you! you are so uplifing and loveable!

      thank you for comming by and commenting
      Love and Blesisngs
      Rend


  • doolie gold member
    March 28

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    Wonderful Rend. Maxboy is right, you would be a lovely addtion to any family.
    You have a heart of gold sweetie.

    Good luck in the contest.


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      March 29

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      Thank you so much for the comment

      Like i said to Don, add me please lol you guys are awesome!

      Love and blessings

      Rend


  • Maxboy gold member
    March 28

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    Beautiful write Rend, you would be such a blessing to any family.

    Best wishes girl

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      March 29
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      Hey Don its so good to see you here,

      thank you so much for your comment!
      Can I be in your? I love my family!

      Rend


  • Nevel
    March 28

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    Love this, my ing sis. Unclouded and pure....Glad to have you as my sister . Maybe in the first stanza:"I"-------->"me"? Great title!

    Erwin

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      March 29
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      Oh my Brother you Rock!

      you are such a sweet heart too!
      thank you for your comment.

      R

  • well done Rend.
    its a lovely peice


  • DolceVito gold member
    March 28

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    Awesome

    Beautiful write, Rend, extraordinary take on the prompt, one that shows what family really is about, and yes, you can fill all the roles...You'd certainly make a good relative to anyone, as I know you are a faithful friend...It's a winner in my book, and I'm certain the contest holder will think so too.


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      March 29
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      Oh Vito, My trusted friend,

      you have made my heart warm and fuzzy thank you for being
      a Valued one to me, and for comming by, I look forward to your comments.

      blessings

      Rend


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    March 28

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    Loved this Rend, and I'd love to have you as a sister, and in a sense, you all ready are; a sister in Christ.


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      March 29
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      MJ thank you,

      you have a very endearing nature so dang sweet!
      you are my brother in Christ and The AP!

      Blessings

      Rend


  • Rose Angel gold member
    March 27

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    From your heart, Rend... You always have a way of wording your writes, in your own style..You have personalized your offer of being a family member in a most tender way...as you are by nature to me your Mom.. penning dear!


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      March 29
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      you know me mom,

      your a blessing to me, thank you so much for your very thoughtful and loving comment.

      Love you much

      Rend

  • This poem is so beautiful! I absolutley love it! You made it so personal to yourself, and how you feel for this jake/brother.
    "Jake I hope you find what you looking for,
    and may all your slots be filled with family
    and friendships,just know i am here if you
    ever need someone.
    Blessings Always Rend " This verse right here is my favorite because I think it shows the most emotion. Again great write!


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      March 29
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      Heather what a blessing

      I am here for you too! always
      your comments are so appreciated
      thank you and blessings
      Rend

  • Awe, this is such a beautiful and touching piece. I love how you expressed yourself in each word. so sincere and simply wonderfully YOU. Stunning, Sis!

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      March 28
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      Oh sis, thank you for your kind

      and generous words, always a blessing to me
      Blessings and love

      Rend

  • Jake Summers
    March 27

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    Very nice poem. I love it. The font sure is fancy too. I like the way you personalized it.
    Thanks, Jake

    • Rend the Veil gold member
      March 28
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      Thank you Jake, my hope is that

      you would, your comment is most appreciated

      Blessings

      Rend

  • Bob Fox
    March 27

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    Rend

    Let not your heart worry. Time will tell and the words of beauty will reach out and bless someone who indeed sees the true beauty in your heart.


    • Rend the Veil gold member
      March 28
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      Bob, as always you sit my feet on the

      path i needed to go, you always have a place in my heart my dear
      trusted friend, thank you for all your comments and support

      blessings always

      Rend

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