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Mischievous


A wide smile and a smirk
with the wind at her feet;
her wings shimmer sunlight,
her eyes shine deceit.




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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    April 21

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    Bandits United!

    Worthy of that trophy! Saying a lot in these 4 lines & so well. Love the content, flow & rhyme here. Way to go.


  • PinkPony
    March 28

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    Oh, I have heard that pixies are 'lil mischievous twirps, and it must be true. Love your poem... so hearty and descriptive.

  • peadiotrocity10
    March 28
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    great