Standing so close to you
I can feel the heat
emanating from your body
I slowly unbutton my blouse
while looking deeply in your eyes
I allow the soft material to
float to the floor
exposing my
lacy
black
bra
your eyes change
they dilate somewhat
as you draw a ragged breath
I know you want to touch
but this is your time to watch
I reach back and unhook my
lacy
black
bra
allowing it to fall at my feet
exposing my ample breasts
for your eyes to feast upon
I lean in allowing only my
nipples to touch you
as I kiss you deeply, passionately
then pull away watching you
struggle not to touch me
I unzip my jeans and let them
fall from my hips
then step out of them
kicking them to the side
only to show you
I’m not wearing panties
you rub yourself through
the fabric of your pants
and I know you will soon need release
I take your hand and place it
on my warm, moist womanhood
giving you the ok to touch and explore
you slowly delve deeply into my
already wet pussy and moan
as you stroke my swollen clit
your mouth finds its way to a
very erect nipple as you suckle
at my breast sending wonderful
sensations throughout my body
your other hand firmly grasps my
other breast massaging it, tweaking
that nipple as well
you make me weak in the knees, love
and you seem to sense this
as you stop what you are doing momentarily
to lay me gently on the bed
quickly removing your clothes
laying next to me resuming what you were doing
your fingers draw lazy circles around my clit
and I moan in pleasure
at the way you are gratifying me
you lean in and kiss me deeply
our tongues searching, finding each other
dancing the dance of love around one another
as you continue to stroke my clit, moving fingers
in and out of my wet pussy begging for release
I can feel your hard cock against my leg
as it pulses and throbs needing release itself
and yet you tend to my needs
faster you stroke my clit
as you leave my mouth kissing your way to
my neck then to my breasts and nipples
you bite lightly on my nipples and I
respond instantly by arching my back slightly
and inhaling sharply
you rub my clit faster but still gently
knowing it won’t be long now
you daringly take both nipples in your mouth
and I moan with pleasure
shuddering and gripping the sheets
you keep rubbing my clit and
I’m suddenly going over the edge
in ecstasy as wave after wave hits me
you don’t let up but keep rubbing to be sure I get
all out of this that I can before you
slowly part my legs with your knees
a s you hover over me, leaning in to kiss me once again
then plunge your rock hard cock deeply within
my dripping pussy as I moan once again with renewed pleasure
you set a rhythm and I match you
it feels so good to have you deeply inside me
you wrap your arms around me
and move slowly and steadily in and out
I wrap my legs around you as you begin to pick up the pace
and now I know it won’t be long
as your breathing has become labored
and you are moaning with pleasure
in your own special way
I hold you tightly as you
become more intense with your
thrusts… in…out…in…out
then suddenly you explode
within me giving me all
you have to offer
filling me to overflowing
before collapsing upon my breasts
covering me with kisses
as you catch your breath
you whisper, “I love you, Darling.”
into my ear
and for someone who is so used to being
in control I feel like I’ve lost all control
with those four words
Author notes
This is my first try at erotica in over a year. I used to write it all the time as some of you may remember. I hope you won't be too disappointed as I'm struggling to get that side of my writing back. Thank you for any reads and comments you may leave. Lily 
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nice write, steamy but retty at the same time
thanks
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Well, this certainly made me weak in the knees!
You convey a lot of tenderness in your writing, even when it is bluntly erotic. In this poem you deftly explored the shared control of two lovers. Really beautiful, and a definite turn on!!!
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Thank you for your encouraging comment on this piece. It is very much appreciated as it had been over a year since I had written anything much less anyting of the erotic nature. Thanks again for the read and the comment and the clappies.
Lily
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think this is a wonderful effort on your return,i can only imagine you would get better and better as time goes on...keep up the great work
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Excellent
I see you have not loss your touch at all. Great job!
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Thanks Ken, If I ever lose my touch I'd just have to....oh nvm.
Love ya, Lily
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Ah..you took me into the world of wonders and the words of beauty as well..a great poetic journey of the love..well done indeed...
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This is so hot and so sensual--my computer is smoking.
Very well done--flows beautifully--I have read it several times.
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You did an awesome job. Loved this.
Jake
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Thank you for the read and the comment. I'm glad you enjoyed.
Lily ♥
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If this s your first erotic read in over a year - it has been MUCH TOO LONG since you have done them as you have quite a knack for it!
To use your words this sweet and sensual piece left me 'weak in the knees' as I pounded my pecker with my jeans wrapped around my ankles as this made me very horny indeed - as all good erotica and adult pieces should do. You have done your job well here and painted a wild and wet scene to say the least. Thanks for sharing the best piece of Erotica that I have seen on AP all week long - and for the BIG & Creamy O too.
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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I do hope you have recovered a bit from my little erotica piece and are able to sit comfortably now.
I appreciate your wonderful comment on "Control" and the time you took to read it.
Lily ♥
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a positive momentous scene, full of smiles and wet wonder and lacy black bra - i thought there would be matching black panties but you were going commando - i think i will chain smoke 15 cigs now, cough an orgasm into the night - a good poem
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Dearest Ian, thank you for your very descriptive comment and yes, she was going full commando in this one. I thought about matching panties but decided against them... put a little twist in this piece hahaha. Don't cough too hard or you might break an egg.
Thanks for the comment and the read dear pirate buddy 
Lily ♥
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This was really hot baby! Whew, you really should do more of this. I think I am going to attack my hubby now ....
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LOL I'm so glad you enjoyed this little break from reality into ecstasy. I appreciate your reading and commenting on this. I hope your hubby enjoys it as much as you did. LOL
Lily ♥
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wow
This is just yummy. I volunteer
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I like those who volunteer!
bring it on baby! thanks for the read and the comment!
Lily ♥
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No it isn't...You wrote one for me
Well not like that...Holy cow woman. Only if you were here right now. Me likey lots, considering I don't get any.
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If I were there right now I'd kick someone's butt out the door and lock it and we'd write our own story and act it out I'm glad you likey...
Love you lots baby girl!
Lily ♥
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Sounds great to me baby!
Can we invite Texas?
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I think that goes without saying! woo hoo ridem cowboy!
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This gave me a hard on the size of texas!
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I'll take that as you liked this. Thank you so much for the read and the comment. Wow, Texas!?!?!?! Interesting!
Lily ♥
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