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Liquid Movement

Sinuously she decides upon her attire
Placing it ever so gently upon the bed
With cat like movements she walks
Sitting upon a director's chair she prepares

Crossing of legs, glancing over her shoulder
Giving me that smile, nearly naked lips
Gleaming, lustrous and glossy
Morphing before me she turns

Eyes, like green diamonds, such brilliance
Bringing her hand slowly to dress each one
Smokey they become, seducing me
Lashes growing longer as she strokes them

Heat rises in me watching the liquid movement
Graciously she brushes the back of her hand
Against my trembling knee, pleading with her eyes
Voice like a soft rain, she asks

Do you like the way I look
I reply with honest, raw emotion
There's something in the way you move
Tornado winds tearing at my thoughts

Are you ready, I ask softly


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  • Tornado winds tearing at my thoughts

    Dear Poet,

    Thank you for entering PREWRITES FOR BRONZE & SILVER
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  • piccola silver member
    April 7
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    great images, softly sensuous without delving into the realm of trash for inspiration. nice job.


  • trekkergirl
    April 5

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    oh wow now this is dead on imagery that you have going on here. I think I need to turn on the AC because it certainly got a little hot in here when I read this work of art of yours. Shhhh. Keep this up and I'll need to take a cold shower. Thanks for sharing this wonderful write and I hope you do well in your contest


  • Kristel Moon
    April 5
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    WOOT

    I loved it.. gave me the Jitters. I mark this one as a personal Fave!


  • BluesMan gold member
    April 2

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    WOW

    This has me panting. I was sucked into this image and felt the Tornado myself! This poem gave me butterflies in my stomach and other places... Heheh


  • Hetha gold member
    March 31
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    Sensual and lovely. This truly stirs the senses. Awesome job!

  • utterly beautiful - I've read about 3 entries and this already has a great chance of winning.

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