Tears falling,
Filling the empty void,
Where my heart once sat.
Leaving tracks,
Crevices
Where they fell,
Down my face.
Ice-crystal eyes,
Pleading,
Please evaporate my tears.
Drown my sorrow.
A contest entry
- dry my tears by going nowhere.
700 points, ended March 28, 9 entries
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Bronze trophy winner
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Great write and
Thank You for entering
Good luck
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thanks for joing my contest this is a good poem and i wish you good luck
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this gave a great image of tears falling, and filling the void where the heart has shriveled away. it's like, i can feel the pain. thank you for your entry.
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this is a masterpiece! im so glad i had the privilege to read it!
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Thank you so much. Im glad you liked it.
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