At first i was alarmed,
i was really scared
to find my tender flesh bound tight,
i was so unprepared
to see Your face light up with glee,
to find that You could really see
each look of pain,
each look of barely processed shame.
i feel the shock.
my useless cock
would rear up proudly, not surrender,
if it weren't for every lock
that You used to make me know
there is nowhere i can go.
Please remind me why i fear this,
let me hear that paddle hiss.
Just let it fly.
Come claim Your prize
of purple vulnerability,
the pride You took away from me
and know that now You have it all
i have no cock , i have no balls.
i'm merely slave.
i'm merely here to show You "brave".
i hear you laugh.
Oh God not that ...
That little wheel of torture reigns my dreams
and yes it makes me want to scream.
Please Madam, don' take it away.
i know this is Your type of play.
Oh Mistress please
just disregard my frightened pleas
and play ...
Author notes
This is for the erotic challenge round three. The link is here:
http://allpoetry.com/column/show/2350677
I was tasked to write a poem about CBT from a male POV.
Not really something that turns me on or does anything for me, but I hope I still did it justice.
There was a single line of music going through my mind when I wrote this - I will Survive by Gloria Gaynor so forgive me if I fell into music mixed with poetry again.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I have no experience in "bondage" except that of my heart but you've done well in describing the pain of such joy.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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well ... what to say about a female submissive having to write about something she knows nothing about nor cares nothing about?!
lol!
Have to be honest - I thought you did a pretty good job here ... I have seen this before and despite the fact that it can never be done to me it did, however, look as though it was enjoyed by both parties
Obviously there could've been more feeling in this one, but alas, you are not 'equippped' (no pun intended!) to deal with the emotional issues
well done! -
I will admit that this is something that Mistress has not tried with me, though She has jokingly mentioned it and i feel that my expressions and feelings might be the same as the ones you have described here.
The fact that you wrote from an unfamiliar POV (a male submissive) really gave this a nice spin.
You added the elemen and emotion of pain nicely here, as I could feel every last bit of it....as I read this.
Overall, you have a very nice write here. Great job!
**Master Ktulu** -
Powerful poem. After reading the author notes I went through it again and it does have the kind of tune to I Will Survive. Powerful emotion in this, as well. Best of luck to you in the challenge.
Haley Mary
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