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kinky sheets

No other man
            knows how to handle
                       my body the way you do,
I feel like a wild cat captured by you.

I want you alone in my dirty little cage

I'll show you mine
                  If you show me yours
Part time lover?

I don't think so.
         There's no part of me
                                that doesnt want you...
I'm not your girl
But tonight.
I'm yours

I can't help myself
             Will you help me?

A picture is worth a thousand words
                                       So picture this...

me,
on you...    
looking into your baby blue eyes.
Sitting in your lap
up and down

There's no telling how far I'd go

Hold your hands above your head
          bite your lip
up and down
Until you die inside of me

All you have to do
Is say my name
         And I belong to you....

 



















 

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  • camus gold member
    September 11

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    Excellent

    Your "wildcat" urges and caged desires unleashed by only him are very erotic to us lesser men who can never know your esoteric pleasures - what a pity lol. Why do I read between the lines and believe he cannot be yours for reasons of commitment elsewhere ? Somehow the last 2 lines make me feel that you are desperate to hear him say he belongs to you and not another - or am I misreading the message ? Either way, a very erotic poem expressed without the distasteful images that plague this sort of poem. Tony x

  • mcfreeman
    August 1
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    strikes a nerve...

    and then digs in


  • WatchingStars
    July 21

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    wow. this is fantastic. it's very rare you find an erotic poem that isn't cheesy or cliche. this is beautiful and captivating!


  • Swtpoetryman
    July 20

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    DAMN, YOU CERTAINLY KNOW HOW TO MAKE A NAUGHTY MAN HARD!

    A fine piece of erotica - in more ways than one - and I for one (as I am sure many would) would be more than willing to


    Hold my hands above my head
    bite my lip
    up and down
    Until I die inside of you

    Fine lines, indeed - and what man could ask for a better ride than that? No one if you ask me.

    A sensual piece that got the juices flowing - with fine imagery - written from the heart and soul.

    Peace & Love!
    Earl.



  • his kiss
    July 11
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    Sexay!
    GL in contest


  • Sugar-Side-Down
    July 2

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    whew.

    i love these lines

    "Until you die inside of me"

    "I feel like a wild cat captured by you.

    I want you alone in my dirty little cage"


  • Cup-a-Joe
    July 2
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    My monitor just melted..


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    July 1
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    One hot tamale sexy

    wow wow wow

    Mistress likes...alot


    Mistress Passions

  • TheGiftofAnonymity
    June 20
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    M-m-my...

    M-my name is John! (Wets himself.)


  • EbonyQueen48
    June 19

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    ALRIGHT now this is definitely HOTTT, loving the sensuality or this erotic piece, beautifully written, I am a fan now!!


  • Red X
    June 8
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    EXCEPTIONAL WORK!!!


  • Da-Lyricologist
    June 6

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    hey lovely I would be the first to tell you that I am Leaving Ap or should I say My lyric are thats why they are gone.. but my poetry remains... lyrics are to be sung not read. I knoq you wanted to do a collaboration.... in that note.. i would like you to be my Ap wife what ever your reponce is I will write a song EXCLUSIVELY WRITTEN FOR YOU... whatever your reponse is I just want to let you know I am 4eva poetically urs...


  • RazorBladesRomance
    June 5

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    Wow turn me on why don't ya jk or am I lol naw but i agree it was a sexy poem and i liked the first three lines the best.XD


  • AngeloftheNight
    June 2

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    Really sexy poem! I like it a lot, especially the first few lines "no other man knows how to handle my body the way you do". Amazing!


  • KelsiEvermore
    June 1

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    great job on this. it's amazing.

    love the beginning:
    No other man
    knows how to handle
    my body the way you do,
    I feel like a wild cat captured by you.
    and this:
    Hold your hands above your head
    bite your lip
    up and down
    Until you die inside of me


  • Edie gold member
    May 31

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    Powerful and sexy!!!

    "Hold your hands above your head
    bite your lip
    up and down
    Until you die inside of me"

    Very Good!

  • Red Hawk
    May 30
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    You are now officially my addiction.


  • chills gold member
    May 29

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    aw fuck - literally. this is worth all the hands I have available (!) so have three - my best!! melted and utterly relating.


  • carebear123
    May 26

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    oh cool. like that alot. it made me smile lol. i like how you use the power of your gender in your poetry just as i use the power of my pain. so good!


  • Maxboy gold member
    May 26

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    Very, very nice, so seductive and captivating.

    Well Done....Best wishes in the contest


  • Amber Roses
    May 25

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    Thank you

    I am glad you reentered my contest and fixed your mistake! This is a great concept! Forbidden love is always the most fun!

  • roland halloway
    May 25

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    Die in side you---

    That's it isn't it? That's verry much what it feels like and truely what happens to a man--He do's happily die in side a woman.


  • sheltered
    May 25
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    Whoa... this gave me chills
    do thrilled and scared equal skilled?
    that is the question

    • chills gold member
      May 29
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      probably! we get scared too. but we can always accept. whereas you lot, men, you have to stand tall. A nice woman never minds and always helps.


      • chills gold member
        May 29
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        oh god - I shouldnt have said that at all


        • hisaddiction
          May 29
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          say what ever you want! my kinda woman lol!

          • chills gold member
            May 29
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            we try and make them feel like the bestest biggest etc. Do they wash dishes? They do not. xx Lying there, legs akimbo, and the snapshot of the mess that is the kitchen in my mind's eye makes me say bleuoptuahgoasjirgwoiehfohrgohfwofhwoiehfwoerfhwsoirfosfr and look at the ceiling! x


  • awannabepoet
    May 25
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    Well this is hot and gritty, just the way I like my erotic poetry.

    "I want you alone in my dirty little cage"

    What more could a man want than a women that is burning up for want of him.

    I know I have not read all of your poems but I certainly will do so, I just come visit you from time to time to keep my mind on edge so to speak.

    I like it, I like it so!


  • Happy3
    May 20
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    Wow.....
    You filled me with lust and pleasure, baby!


  • Charmaine
    April 29

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    wow

    Its very powerful and erotic and not complicated. I really liked this poem...and yes, it turned me on too... funny that.


  • J L Whalen
    April 28

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    "Hold your hands above your head
    bite your lip
    up and down
    Until you die inside of me"

    une petit mort...yeah I'm turned on, well done...


  • messyjessydirtygirl
    April 23

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    steamy...

    very hot!!... i like your play on the domination submission roles... and the grey areas inbetween
    great read thanks!


  • Jay81
    April 21
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    Might not mean much from a poetry rookie, but well done.


  • carlylane
    April 21

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    Amazing.

    I have been there before but your poem is almost better then that moment... if that makes an sense


  • inspired-8 gold member
    April 18
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    Tantalizing....


  • Fox.
    April 15
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    Damn.I need one too(cold shower). I'll get in that cage. Gladly.


  • Ademon
    April 14
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    Ok, yea, I totally bit my lip reading this....omg cold shower cold shower!!!!


  • Gigglegasm gold member
    April 12

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    This is very different to the last one I read. Very sexy
    I loved

    Part time lover?

    I don't think so.
    There's no part of me
    that doesnt want you...
    I'm not your girl
    But tonight.
    I'm yours

  • tinytoes
    April 12

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    Ooh!

    Go, go, go. Loved this. Absolutely a must read! Life is definitely a channel for experiencing good things.


  • Draig aine gold member
    April 12

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    oh I like

    well done, visual, erotic and rich, great imagery, several lines I would have loved to have written well done


  • GypsyRoseDancer
    April 12

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    Oooooooh!!!

    "Part time lover?
    I don't think so.
    There's no part of me
    that doesnt want you..."

    So well said! This poem has me grinning in this devilish little grin and nodding while I edge towards the front of my seat with each line. Enticingly written - I think that best describes it. I believe I'm off to read more from you!


    Gypsy--<<


  • shynet1648
    April 10
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    Bravo

    I like very much


  • Beret55 silver member
    April 10
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    mmmmmmmmmmmm my kind of woman.
    I love it.


  • Shakespure
    April 7
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    i like your style of writing keep doing it


  • Swangrnv gold member
    April 6

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    nice

    imagery was very good and the story was enjoyable, love the line: "until you die inside of me" that was a WOW! moment..


  • Mantha
    April 4
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    Superb


  • The Drifter
    April 2

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    That is the type of offer most men dream of and wish for. You expressed it very well. My opinion in one words is: WOW----- Just set the time and place.


  • Fallen Soul
    April 2
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    i like this one it's kinda what i tell my bf at night lol. keep it up


  • Pittsburghpoet
    March 31

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    hi


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    March 30

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    Wow, what a great visual. Truly an erotic and inspiring piece. Been wanting to write one, but just haven't been. Loved it, sis.


  • LadyTzimisce
    March 30
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    This is fucking sexy. I love it.. absolutly love it


  • Luciferschild
    March 29
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    interesting...


  • LoveGoneMad
    March 29
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    erotic and luring. , well done. *bow*
    loved it


  • Love-EroticPoet
    March 29

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    I'll say your name
    Very erotic and luring. The imagery is almost too good.
    I did get destracted with the line "I want you alone in my dirty little cage" when I think of a dirty cage its not a good thing, maybe take out the word dirty. The image of you in a cage is already stimulating and I think it will keep the effect you want


  • HpWICKEDangel
    March 28
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    dirty dirty dirty.... but i like


  • willdabeast
    March 28
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    ooooh

    oooh... kinky sex time = goood... better comment to come later, great one!


  • white stone
    March 27
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    "until you die inside of me"... ...but my eyes are brown...lol.


  • EndlessNameless
    March 27
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    those sure are some kinky sheets. "Part time lover?

    I don't think so."


  • wipexawayxyourxtear
    March 27
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    well now I'm blushing lol and once again you amaze me.


  • Rainbow7
    March 27

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    I'll show you mine
    If you show me yours,
    Part time lover!

    That charms me so!

    I'm not your girl
    But tonight
    I'm yours.

    That attracts me too.

    There's no telling how far I'd go.

    That makes me imagine lots of things, love

  • J Macabre gold member
    March 27

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    That's pretty hardcore erotica there.
    I'm convinced that your one of the best this site's got to offer for erotica.
    If you like pictures to go with your writes look up Luis Royo.
    Look under his collection called "Prohibited".
    That should stur up your writing even more.

    • hisaddiction
      March 27
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      i forgot i had those pics on my computer, thanks for the reminder, now..it's complete, thanks for the comment...oh and- still cool.


  • bonboncandie
    March 27
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    ha. nice


  • Valerien Raven
    March 27
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    S'a very nice piece. Loved it xxx.


  • Matt E. Smith gold member
    March 27

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    *says your name*

    ..while you look into my baby blues lol

    nice poem one of my favourites that you have written

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