As the world goes by
i wonder why
you had to leave me
and why couldnt u see its killing me.
So truely u have no soul
its like its made out of dark black buring coal.
As i think of you, and how u left me
i just wanna do something to make you see,
that i still love you.
So i put this cold rusty blade and press it agenst my skin.
the pain so beautiful.
all i can do is now think of you.
I showed you what i have done.
but you didnt give a shit , u said to me that i just had a hissy fit.
but i'll show u and everyone who is against me
and then u'll all be sorry.
So now u see why i wrote this suicide note 4 you
to telll you that I STILL LOVE U an alwayz will.
xx
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heyy erika
naaaaw, is this about jake ?
well who ever it was about you obviously really did love him and its so sad your not with him anymore.
well tht just means that he isnt the one for you and you will find him somedayjust trust in that and try to live a happy life and try not to think about the bad things!
and i can totally relate to how you feel, i felt the exact same way when josh dumped me and my friends is what got me though so while your having a hard time coz of your break up, realy on your friends and talk to them, and you knnow that if you need to talk im here.
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Lov ethis poe
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awesome poem i could really relate!!
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aww this peom is how i feel. It touched what was left of my heart and made me feel again. this is why i thank u for what u wrot
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