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Skies Painted Ever Tragic

I watch you gallantly arise,
And that is your greatest blunder.
Leaving the midnight hour behind,
You fill the new found day with wonder,
And pain my empty eyes.
I despise you ever tragic sun,
For you let me go astray,
And as long as I walk these soils,
I will sit in solitude and pray,
For your pain to have begun.
I loathe you ever tragic star,
For what you've done to me.
Under your watch I was tortured,
Affliction would not let me be,
And you chuckled from afar.
I despise you ever circling fire,
For greeting cyan skies,
Which combined with your cheery malice,
Mocked me with sightless eyes,
My heart was on the pyre.
I curse you, the mayans charm,
For letting my family slip,
And for sitting idly by,
As you watched the crimson drip,
From my lovers arm.
I hate you ever solar being,
And I'll hate you forever more.
For ruining each and every day,
Making them rotten to the core,
I'll hate until it has no meaning!

Author notes

A poem about ones hatred for the sun and the feeling that it was mocking him and letting bad things happen. Based primarily on my love for space and darker forms of music I think it came out quite well. It was inspired heavily by Novemebrs Doom's "The Pale Haunt Departure".

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  • individuality gold member
    March 28

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    a good poem, ah the sun, it is there, watching always, silent though it coughs fire across space at times, to knock our little world into chaos.