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to remember;;

I want to taste the rainbow

in your eyes;;

forget to lose hope

& believe in my heart.

it's so hard to remember anything else.

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  • Meroza
    March 31

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    This is a cute poem. I like the imagery you leave the reader with. Almost makes me pink and fluffy inside

    Well done.


  • Tqop
    March 28
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    I love the first line especially. Nice job.


  • Blue-Rose Beauty
    March 28
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    no


  • Candy Morphine
    March 27

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    God, I love this. There is so much emotion streaming from so few words. This is unbelievable really.


  • arezes mom
    March 27
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    good, weird, makes me think. i like it.

    lissa


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    March 27
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    Lol font is all weird.

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