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Mary Jane

 

My oh my how you make me want you

After just one suck on the lips, you

Readily draw me in, giving me giddy thoughts

You seduce me with illusions of indulgence

 

Jumping through hoops I make a fool of myself

Angrily coming down from your sweetness I

Nearly beg for your next unwavering knowledge

Educating me in the ways of your mightiness

 

 

Author notes

Mary Jane.. just another word for Marijuana... I know that a lot of people say that this drug used in moderation can give them a spiritual high and cause them to feel no pain. But the side affects are astronomically bad.

Photo from: http://i637.photobucket.com/albums/uu95/babyskunk/weedgirl.jpg?t=1238146308


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Favourite Colour: Blue
Favourite Number : 7
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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    April 1

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    Lovely poem, short but expressive.
    Very interesting name Kahy, never heard of it before.
    Number seven is one of my favourite numbers too and thank you for the positive word choice


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    March 27

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    may i print this and see if others like it for the book i am doing? i really like it and think that they may as well. viyanna rosemarie

    • tears.of.silence
      March 27
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      Absolutely... just credit me that's all I ask.. I will be doing more poems like this if you like them you may use them. thanks for wanting to use my poems.


  • wipexawayxyourxtear
    March 27
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    Nice. Love your poem and the pic


  • loving.a.soldier
    March 27

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    Nice write!! And the picture is pretty...interesting. lol. I like the drug choice you picked for this piece. Keep it up!

    <3 - Jess


  • kyle19
    March 27

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    Very interesting pic indeed! Yeah, I hear it from a lot of people that it is so good! But you are correct, side affects are sooo bad! I can get that high by enjoying my favorite food, when I eat it sooo slow and enjoy every bite! My food is legal and cheaper!

    Kyle

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