Whips escort my soul to peace
as handcuffed heart belongs to You;
tranquility found ...
in the touch of Your knives.
my essence runs pure
through Your blistered fingers
while wax glazes vision
to see my beauty through Your eyes.
Your acceptance of individuality
has completed my heartbeat,
making each sound
a scream of pain ...
W/we walk this road of splintered love
seeking only O/our true self -
so that i may be tethered to You
for eternity and a day.
Heart, soul and gasps of adoration
adorn this collar around Your pet:
You have brought colour to this world
where before it was grey.
Author notes
For the Love of my life: Tattboy
i will ALWAYS be Yours
In a list
A contest entry
- The Words That Bind... by ReachingForStars.
875 points, ended April 5, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I can feel the love that you have for your master and it can only come from the love he has for you. Beautiful.
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The submission to whom you devote yourself is beautiful in it's own way. This poem is all about your love for your master. This Master should be proud to have you. You're an amazing writer and when you write, you seem to make the words come alive.
The imagery is quite amazing and the devotion to this one person is awe-inspiring. I love it! Please please keep writing. You did an awesome job!!!
Sammy
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This is something that shows the love and devotion that you have for Him. This shows us all that when you are with Him, you can rediscover whom you are.
"Bravo"
For this is an outstanding poem where two lives.. are forever joined as one. yours and your Master.
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Dedication, love and honesty runs through this piece. I also noticed that you seem to re-discover yourselves all over again, when you are together.
A coming together of two souls. You completely put your life in the hands of the one who is your Lover and Master. The love runs deep in this piece. Very well-written Tatts.
Be seeing you on the 'Dark Road' my friend.
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Isn't it wonderful when you feel so wonderfully protected and loved, when the very thing that is meant to hurt you is wrapped with passion and love? Very well written and straight from the heart.
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This is what I always wanted for the two of you. I loved this and my fave lines are the same as all the others' here. I think you are a fabby poet and we need to whip that muse of yours in line so we can see more of you.
PS - Drop me a note hun! I have so much news ... HUGS!!!!!
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It is always good to see you writing my friend, it is far too rare an event at the moment.
Keep it up
Jeff
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"Heart, soul and gasps of adoration
adorn this collar around Your pet:"
Those two lines are amazingly eloquent! Thank you so much for entering this beautiful piece in the contest. -
I have to agree with Tattboy on this one Chantell.
your line "W/we walk this road of splintered love
seeking only O/our true self -" is absolutely beautiful.
And yes you should write more because you do this so well, and you do it far better than myself too.
Heres wishing you luck in the contest.
**Master Ktulu**
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This is beautiful My love.
you should write more because you are very very good!
Particularly liked "W/we walk this road of splintered love
seeking only O/our true self"
Well done My pet!
Note to self - Need to get a new whip ...
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my muse seems to go off on his own journeys so often lately
but just because i don't write about how much i love You doesn't mean that i am not Yours
i love You with everything i am
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