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Moonlight Affair

 

 

 

Upon red satin sheets

a body lays exhausted

Midnight affair

leaving one breathless

Eyes revealing

such a trail of lust

That lingers on the lips

then down to the toes

 

His form beautiful

beneath

the moonlight

A hunger within

becomes uncontrollable

Body starts to

sway forward, breathing

fast pace

 

Straddling his thighs

slowly, resting

A warm shaved mound

against an

ivory ass, breasts

against center back

Lips nibbling softly

on his neck, then shoulders

 

Soft morning moans

half sleep,

half dreaming

His smile broadens

at the sucking

of his earlobes

Fingertips trailing

underneath his frame

 

Slightly wet

as his manhood

surrenders willingly

throbbing, with intensity

His body slowly rises

allowing full access

Wrapping hand around

the thick base

 

Pressing against him

stroking the long

shaft, I become heated

Shaved mound now grinds

feverishly hard

against him, wanting more

Soft whispers against

his shoulder blades....

 

"I am ready, are you?"

 

Loosening the hair clip

dark spirals fall

as I rise allowing him

to turn over

Straddling his stick

of blazing fire

sliding slowly into place

until hitting bottom

 

Eye to eye

lust filled and ready

leaning forward

hands entwined in

the satin sheets

large breasts against

him, he moans

erect nipples push into him

 

Grinding slowly

inhaling his sexual scent

throbbing, thrusting

the need becoming intense

Leaning back, back arched

I ride, up and down,

the base nice and wet

breasts in perfect...rhythm

 

His hands guiding my hips

-slamming me down-

lifting up -slamming down-

Pleading, "don't stop"

eyes rolling back, his

then mine

Moans of pleasure, escaping,

as each thrust escalates

 

Two bodies, joined in

one lustful fantasy

Releasing our passion

we shook

final eruption took place

Beneath the moonlight

on red satin sheets

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Prompt: Satin sheets


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Tag made for me: AP Girlfriend: Sweet Impatience

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  • Knight70
    July 8

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    Cold shower on the way!

    I absolutely loved the visual. You definitely have a flair for the exotic. I'm usually so shy with erotic pieces. I've only written two, and they were subtle erotica, and both of them involved a vampiress. I really enjoyed writing those for my wife, especially Lusting for Ophelia. She loves to read vampire romance novels, and she inspired me to start writing my first contemporary romance novel which I've been working on for a couple of months.

    Don

    • Thank you Don, for your comment.. yes i enjoy pennin the erotic lol. Good luck with your novel and let me know when it hits the stores


      • Knight70
        July 8
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        You're welcome.

        Thank you for wishing me luck on my novel, Tory. I sure do need all the good luck I can get. Publishers are kind of like Simon Cowell at times, and that can be intimidating for aspiring novelists, but that's what writers have to be willing to go through many times over to get published. When I think it's good enough, I'll look for a reputable literary agent. It's a mess of mixed dialogue and research for the moment. I haven't even got past the first chapter, but much of the story is in my head. I based one of my poems a few months ago off the characters. My dream is to walk into Barnes and Nobles (my favorite store) and see my full name on a novel. My name actually is on some mystery novels. There's a Don Winslow who has published many of those already. Gotta love the irony.

        Don

    • Thank you Don, for your comment.. yes i enjoy pennin the erotic lol. Good luck with your novel and let me know when it hits the stores

  • Sensual fire...red is the perfect color for this write!

    HOT Indeed~


    Az

  • Smoking hot and you got the lot love it


  • jul
    April 1
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    AMAZING!!! Thanks for entering the contest and good luck to you.
    Ju


  • Griswold silver member
    March 29
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    Mmmmmmmmmm, Ahhhhhh, Well just DAMN!!! I Love you...Scott


  • doolie gold member
    March 28

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    I'm going to have to buy me some red satin sheets. This is a very hot and sensual write Tory. I see my Maxboy enjoyed it too.

    Best of luck to you in the contest.


  • The Drifter
    March 28
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    This would be a dream come true--Excellent poem.
    You have me dreaming.


  • Rclane gold member
    March 27
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    And into the moonlight i do go.....Very well penned. Once I started to read couldn't stop.

  • Thank you for entering my contest SATIN SHEETS.
    Please note: RULES: line max 50.
    If you'd like to elongate your lines or whatever to fit the rules, please let me know and I'll be dellighted to readf your entry.
    Otherwise, I'm sorry but no exceptions.
    Blessings,
    Liquid

    • Its okat I will save you the problem of removing it. I saw the line limit after.

      No big deal good luck with your contest


  • Maxboy gold member
    March 27
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    !! WOW !!

    That was awesome girl, must head for the shower now.

    Liquid Fire Sweetie....Best wishes in the contest(No Contest)

  • whispers to my Tory...O my goodness this is steamy..sensual and very warm...fans face

     

    love you girl


  • white stone
    March 27

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    Wow you drew that out well. That's not easy to achieve folks...


  • cricketjeff gold member
    March 27

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    !!!!!!
    Passionate, \sensul, steamy, very difficult to read on a commuter train!!!!

    Great stuff



    Jeff


  • estbelle gold member
    March 27

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    Hot and steamy and so very sexy

    I admire the bg so much


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    March 27
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    Oh yeah, here you go!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    March 27

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    Simply Beautiful!

    Wow, this is frickin' AWESOME!
    Another HOT and wonderful write from
    you my friend. I love the story line,
    imagery, and background in this one.
    You really have a way with words and
    the way that you wrote this is absolutely
    breathtaking! Well done and I hope that you
    do well with it in this contest! Good luck!
    Thanks a lot for sharing it here!




    Jeremy0826

  • just as I suspected

    I new when I clicked this link it would be hot wonderful and perfect. this one fogged up my moniter screen. loved it thanks NIc

  • Holy shit!!! Wow talk about setting the page on fire.. my monitor just melted one very HOT & SIZZLING Poem.. wow.. this was just what I needed to read, Inspiration most definitely..

    Good luck
    kat


    I love you

    • s now c'mere lol

      INSPIRATION??? Of course a individual sparked this by reading his Fools Gold piece lol. Imagine and his had nothing to do with sex. Sheesh what the cuck happened to my mind oh well. Im sure someone will find it and tell me where to go
      until then I write on.

      Glad you liked honey

      I love you too


  • hisaddiction
    March 27
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    holy shit! wow....fucking wow!

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