With a hook on his hand
And a smirk on his face
His mustache well curled
And a most deadly gaze
He scratches his chin
With a mean sinister scoff
He spots his enemy
And the smile's whipped off
Pan Soars through the air
And cuts up his sails
Hook sends off his men
But they all seem to fail
'You want to beat me?
But you're nothing but talk! !
Let's finally settle this!
A duel on Skull Rock! ! '
'You want you're fight,
fine Hook, you're on! !
I'll take you down...
I'll see you at dawn! '
So Pan flew away
With the ship disband
Hook sneered a smile
'Good bye....Peter Pan! '
Dawn had come,
Morning was here
Time for the battle
That has waged on for years
Hook waited for his rival
Alone and ready
He stood with his sword
Right handed and steady
Pan soared into the cave
And cawed like a cock
Showing his bravery
And showing his mock
Hook was disgusted
But still managed to smile
'Hey there, Hooky!
Where's the Crocodile? '
'Waiting for you dear boy,
He likes the taste of a coward! '
'Coward? ! I'm not afraid! '
'But it is you whom he will devour!
Prove to me boy,
Are you a cock or a chicken! ! ?
Walk on two legs
And You shall be stricken! ! ! '
'Very well Hook,
No more playing games! '
'Very good Pan,
Let's bring an end to this strain! '
And so it had started...
And so they began...
And so they continued...
For hours on end!
Pan struck Hook on his shoulder
And forced his blade free
He pushed him up against the wall
And slowly watched him bleed
'Well there Hook...
It seems you have lost?
See what your ignorance
Has finally cost?
I'll give you your word...
One last request...'
'How bout it Pan?
A last cigarette? '
So Pan nodded
And Hook pulled out his cig.
He lit it up
And took in a swig
'So I guess you've won Pan
...After all these years...
I'll die to a boy...
Who never showed fear!
I'll die to the hands
Of the greatest fighter
In Neverland
Or any place higher...
You've finally beaten me...
...I think I might...cry! ! ! '
But right there he threw the cig
In Pans eye
Pan dropped his dagger
And stumbled back in blindness
Hook picked it up,
And slashed without kindness
Pan laid, upon the floor
A broken bloody mess
'You are but a boy...
Nothing more...nothing less..
You have destroyed
All that's inside of me...
And now your death
Shall be nothing...but irony! ! '
So he raised his hook,
And crashed it down,
Splitting Pan's head
Right through his crown!
Hook began to laugh
'Good bye...Peter Pan'
And with a final scoff (He said)
'Good bye....Neverland! ! '
And for the rest of eternity
He wrecked havoc on all
Ever since
The Rooster's great fall
Hook ruled supreme
No one could stop his plans
He captained the Jolly Roger...
And now rules...Neverland
Author notes
Inspired (obviously) by the Peter Pan Stories.
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Comments
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Thanks for your well written entry but i wasnt too shock with the ending...
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Very nice writing on a classic!
Thanks for the entry!
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Great job!
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cool!
i love it! haha..
all the pirate fights seem to be so fun,specially peter pan of course..
cool great poem.xx


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I love Peter Pan.
Wonderful write.
xxxx
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Great job! You caught the story well.
Jake

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