Sculpting the hushed ferocity of the night;
built to ravage against the soft light of the dawn.
In the fray they struggle, in a flash of silver and red;
the sun and the stars ignite and flare with vigor.
A blade of mighty sunlight strikes stable and unwavering;
The sun burns all visible opposition into unrecognizable form.
The stars screech their reply into the heavens wherest the Night rests.
Weak light disappears, replaced by a harsher radiance.
This scintillating antagonist slaughters all who oppose;
the merging of Dawn and Night.
Author notes
Samantha Marie
A contest entry
- Amaranthine Lover's Getting Rid of Some Points! by amaranthine lover.
1750 points, ended April 22, 33 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre-Write Madness by Bean Sidhe.
700 points, ends December 11, 48 entries
• next poem in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
Comments
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scintillating antagonist slaughters
- I quite like your use of those words.
Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck to you.
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very deep I like short poems as well so this was right up my alley I think I will add this to the finalist list. I give it a 5/10 I thank you from the bottom of my heart for entering :
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Thank you
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You forgot some commas where they were desperately needed, but all in all, nicely well written. -
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thank you
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Oh my goodness!!!
there we go.
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Lol! *CLAPPY*
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Very good and descriptive. *clappy.*
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I love how you imply that the merging is really a victory of the light, and how even though light has a normally good and virtous connotation you call it harsh, making us question what "good" and "bad" really are. I enjoyed reading this poem. It is rather beautiful.
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Thank you
That's the best comment I've gotten so far, you really read into this and captured the meaning!! Thanks Conner
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your poems recently are all sounding like one poem in differnt pieces... diversify
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I'm tryyyyyying it's not working
Help me Abe
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The interaction of opposites is dynamic and fused together in a radiantly descriptive write.
Excellent!
Much enjoyed this 
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Thanks Sol
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i really like this poem,its great.
very well written and i love your choice in words.your an amazing writer.
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Thanks love <3
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The merging of Dawn and Night
I like how you painted this image through your words
in a flash of silver and red
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Thank you
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