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Companionship

What happens when people over think things? It’s impossible to even understand. They can’t understand anything or comprehend on a higher level. It’s clouded by the unwanted feelings.  People can’t make an understanding of anything when the lines are blurred.

[Follow the fruit to Eden, but be aware
of all the other things. Like the snake. The
chupacabra of our fairy tales and
the nightmares that surround them. They scare me.]

Mistakes usually cause problems. Why do people start them? There is no reason for it. Only that many just thrive on them. But that’s just it. The thing has finally turned into a dependency. It’s quite futile to resist it because man is born to be like that. We learn and live through problems.


[Distilled rainbows are always every where.
On the brink of exhaustion, rainbows toil.
Fountains of youth and blazing fires burn.
‘Twixt the fame and glory the youth crumble.]

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  • blondevamp
    March 26

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    [Distilled rainbows are always every where.
    On the brink of exhaustion, rainbows toil.
    Fountains of youth and blazing fires burn.
    ‘Twixt the fame and glory the youth crumble.]
    Those are my favorite lines. they are completly amazing and blew me away.