If this is to be my end
Then let him be beside me
I won't go screaming
I'll go moaning
His hands, his touch
Ecstacy
No one else has this effect on me
The dark outside
Creeping over my skin
And the dark inside Is bursting within
Violent winds and breaking trees
There's a tornado outside
And one in me
I know people could die
People will get hurt
I know, I've been
One of them
But the tornado
Belonged to him
-Andi
Author notes
Yeah, we had tornados all over today, and I really like this guy....so I put them together into a bit of a sensual poem.
-Andi-
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oi. wow... another great write as usuall hun. ^.^ keep up the good work. thx
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Thank you so much!!
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.... wow
really good i liked and i'm not much of a sensual person and this was good
kudos
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ROCK ON ANDI!!! This was great though I think you couldve been a bit more sensual. lol
Well done sis!
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Thankies!
Yeah, I probably could, but the guy doesn't even knkow I like him yet. Well, I take that back. He'd have to be blind not to notice, but I havent told him, so yeah! But I know what you mean, I've done other sensual poems, I usually stick to sensual withtin poetry. If I go striaght into sex, it'll be in prose...and I have done that
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