so here i sit
writing this book
nothing comes to mine
i crumple the paper and throgh it
it rolls under my coffe tablestill nothing
writes block
nothing
the paper
is blank
forever
and ever
and ever
writers block
A contest entry
- Writer's Block by Desdmona.
600 points, ended March 27, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
plz i know it sucks just don't say anything that will make me sad plz?
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I like the ending about forever and ever and ever. I think this has potential if you keep working at it. Maybe check your spelling and sift through your thesaurus a bit, this could get better. I did enjoy it though. Good job and good luck! ~Des
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Izzy this is sad... no not really it made me laugh!
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i thought it really sucked
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hello r u there?
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did you read my other poems?
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