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Miserable.....

It's late at night and I'm wide awake
Thinking of you and the things you take.

You took the heart that once was mine
You took my body, & scrambled my mind.

The worst part is these nights at home
When surrounded by people, I feel alone.

No one exists with out you here
I want you close, our bodies near.

Now your reading I want to say,
You make me miserable in the BEST way!

Miserable every second I'm not with you
Oh so miserable and theirs nothing I can do.

You're beautiful, Inside and out.
Your everything I've dreamed about.

I miss the warmth of your touch, your kiss.
Only love could make me feel like this.

You got it all baby, the looks the brains
Everything it takes to drive me insane!

I want you for my own, its true.
I feel completely lost without you.

Butterflies flutter like crazy inside me.
When I think of you standing beside me.

Laying in bed I wish you were here.
The thought of losing you brings me fear.

You have no Idea how much I miss you.
My mind wonders if you miss me too...

I want to be with you, each chance I get.
I'm begging you boy, please don't forget.

I think I'm In love..what can I say?
THANK you for making me miserable, In the very best way.

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  • It's an interesting state to be in!

    Congrats on your bronze trophy.

  • Very Nice.

    Lovely, darling. I love the flow and your words just say it out loud. Good luck and thank you for entering my contest.

    ~XoXo Mollipop


  • GoOnDream
    April 21
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    I understand this one completely.

    This reminds me exactly of how I feel about nick. This is really good.


  • star girl
    April 6

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    Great!!

    I loved this write!It has an awesome flow and you just made a great ending.I loved the rhyme and how much depth you put into this. So thank you for entering!
    Good luck


  • HeartBr8ker
    March 26

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    I love this poem! I can sooo rlate. I liked the flow, The rhyme, The meaning. Everything! You are quickly becoming one of my favorite poet. Great write. Keep it up... this is my favorite part...

    Butterflies flutter like crazy inside me.
    When I think of you standing beside me.

    Laying in bed I wish you were here.
    The thought of losing you brings me fear.

    You have no Idea how much I miss you.
    My mind wonders if you miss me too...

    I want to be with you, each chance I get.
    I'm begging you boy, please don't forget.

    I think I'm In love..what can I say?
    THANK you for making me miserable, In the very best way.

    Great write


  • bonboncandie
    March 26
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    I love it

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