I can't breathe,but i'm not dead
I was strangled,but still untouched
Hurtful words cut me,yet I don't bleed
I wish there was a way,
I could show you how abused I am.
No stopping,for that pitiful past,
there is no sorry,for bruises and complaint
Moving forward,
I try,I try
ah but today,
it all caught up to me.
and I was not strangled,I was not cut.
into many pieces -
I was simply torn apart
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Comments
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i really really like this poem. ur a great writer
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very thought invoking
, i loved it you're a great writer and i hope you keep up the good work
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Wow
This was a really good poem. It truly expressed your inner pain of what judgement does to you. Thank you for giving me the chance to read this.
Welcome to the Finalists list
~Serenity
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Very deep emotion here.
Great job on this piece, I love the strong simplicity here.
Bravo!!!
♥ Kate
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