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I Got Nothing

I got nothing,
the muse has died inside
and lately what I read
reeks of rotting verb-age
words without meaning
tumbling forth off the page
like a perpetually open thesaurus.

Where is the soul of the poet?
Has it gone the way of
the ego spouting false wisdom
or the sultry side of sexual wit gone wild?
Where is the poet's purpose to respond
to a higher calling?

Like I said I got nothing but
coffee shop beatnik shock therapy-
the thump of a dim-witted drum
while everyone ooh’s and ahhh’s
at their wisdom and depth

while others puke in disdain-
another fallen in the name of vanity
and false pride, flaunting their degrees
and fancy poetry that no one understands.

Hey what do I know?
I’m just a country girl
needing a fast horse to ride,
a few shots of tequila
and something to rid me of these
damn night sweats called menopause.
Like I said.. I got nothing


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Author notes

My own personal rant about my writers block.

And I need to be very clear about this.. I am in no way saying I am a great poet.. what I'm saying here is that I feel I have nothing to offer the literary world, since I sometimes feel I'm a "dim-witted drum" not understanding some of the imagery I read in others work.

Picture credit to photobucket: fwm-sangdespoets.

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  • penman gold member
    June 24
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    Wonderful

    such a well written creation. And so filled with truth. thank you for sharing.


    • penchanted
      June 24
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      Thank you for your kind comment. This was one of the first I'd penned after comeing to AP. I was pretty nervous about posting it.. . But I'm learning that no one really reads your poetry on here unless your part of the elit group who call themselves scribe. don't tell anyone I said that!


  • MorbidGarden
    March 28

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    YOU GOT IT ALL, GIRL!! you totally rock...and perhaps you are The Last Poet...i understand where you're coming from, though...lots of stuff you read today is terrible...there is nothing...just crap...but, i'm sure there was crap out when the greats were still unknown...they died away...perhaps one day we shall see a great come of our era...this is perfect...great job!

    • penchanted
      March 28
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      Ohh My

      Thank you so much.. I love that you think "I Rock".. ( I love that saying by the way) but I am in noooo way the Last Poet! I'm not much of a poet at all. I just have a difficult time understanding some of the imagery I see in poetry and I believe it's all in the learning curve for me. And when I said "I Got Nothing".. I'm saying it for me.. I have nothing..I feel I have nothing to offer the literary world..I'm reading works that I don't even understand and seeing BRAVO! under it and I scratch my head, thinking huh? Am I that dim witted? Hence the line "the thump of a dim-witted drum" What I'm getting here from your comment and my feedback is the wonderful thing in life called "perception" and I love the insight you have brought to me by making me think through your comment on a deeper level seeing that we dont' always understand someone elses poetry even if we feel it perfectly clear. Sometimes we don't always understand our own poetry. LOL
      Thanks again for your comment.. it's been really valuable to me.


      Jo


  • Desdmona
    March 27

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    The photo added a lot to the poem. The diction was well chosen. My favorite line was "coffee shop beatnik shock therapy" I don't know why but that done stuck out to me. Good job and good luck! ~Des

    • penchanted
      March 27
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      Thank you

      and thank you for the contest, once I spewed what was brewing inside me, I was able to write another poem. I love that photo.. after I wrote it I went to photoshop looking for a coffeshop poetry shot.. thinking I'd never find one.. ohhhh what a find it was.. I don't usually add photos to my writes.. have done so that last two.. but I want my writes to grow to stand on their own.. But thank you for the comment and the contest. It's been a joy!
      Jo

  • sleepinglion
    March 26

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    There is such honesty in this poem, the more we reveal the true person lurking behind all those false faces, the more we will realise we are all the same.
    All parts of Gods wonderful universe, all wanting to give and receive love. Because we are love
    I like your style you sassy lady from Oregon
    Lion

    • penchanted
      March 26

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      Thank you

      Thank you so much you sweet sleeping lion... I seemed to have lost my muse so I was grateful for this contest that seemed to have gotten it going again.. even if it's in a new direction than I've gone before.. heck..it's the wild frontier out in poetry land, many trails to blaze in a new and different way! We try on different styles like trying on new shoes.. sleep well my new friend..
      Jo

      • sleepinglion
        March 27
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        penchanted

        Your idea of trying on new shoes reminds me of a Gerry Raferty song, with the words, -
        ''Each day you try on a different person,
        trying to find out who you really are''

        I certainly am familiar with this sentiment
        Lion

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